This was the image I made the most mistakes on. 1. Too digitized. I enlarged it for the portfolio and it was choppy on the curves. My drawing was not as specific as it should have been, especially on the van, grill, lines, etc. It was hard to tell what was really going on. (Plan to redo!) |
Suggestion here was to replace lettering with icon on the sign for non-English readers. |
Suggestion here was to pay more attention to lines on skirt. Make them flow with folds, etc. |
Suggestion here was to watch the quality of images I use. Here the body is blurry. And avoid cliche eyes! |
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Giuseppie liked this image and the use of painted paper. |